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November 27, 2012
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Me and Myrah by Zephyter0 Me and Myrah by Zephyter0
A short and quick picture for my good friend and roomate Myrah. I hope she likes it, and I want her to know how much she means to me.

though we don't spend all that much time together, I hope she realizes that she is one of my best friends in the world.

Thank you for your time <3

~Northern
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Positives:
You did an amazing job shading the body and adding a glistening effect to the mane and tail. The body form and positioning is very well put together. The hairstyles conform to the head nicely. The wings are positioned very accurately on the body. The eyes have a very distinct glare.
Negatives:
The ponies' eyes seem to be offset and are staring into the distance. The pony on the left seems to be floating off the ground, and she is also missing a nostril. The nose of the pony on the right is too straight, and the tweak in its' mane at the top doesn't really conform to the rest of the mane.

(Side Note: some of the 'Negatives' I listed may be irrelevant if it was something you intended to be a part of the artwork.)
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Mellasaphian Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist
awwweh!
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CobaltLeo692 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable :3
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AnotherDrawfriend Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice :)
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